User:Littlee0804/Cold War/Fujia0801 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Littlee0804


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Littlee0804/Cold War - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cold War - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The structure of the article seems very clear that provides a general information for the cold war's environmental impacts with specific information within the Soviet Union and America cases.

- And also the tone is easy to read with the neutral perspective.

- More information needed in the topic of other nations' affected impacts by the cold war.

- And I noticed that there are only 4 references within the existing article. I think it very be more comprehensive and viable to have more references to add on more information. Maybe it is better to find the resources to add more points about the existing environmental issues caused by the cold war.

- The existing references are reliable and up-to-date.

- I think it will be nice to talk something about the eco-feminism during the cold war. Following up the agenda of UN 2030 might provide more subtopics you can explore and talk about in this article (that connects with the past, the present and the future).

- Images and pictures needed to enhance the further understanding for the topic.

- And the Cold War Arm Race can be linked to the existing wikipedia page (I found there is one called arm race). [You can also do the same thing with the green evolution etc.]