User:Littlemissfeminist/War on poverty/Sgcoggin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Littlemissfeminist


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * War on poverty - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The added content is relevant to the topic, neutral, and provides important information that was previously lacking in the article. The sources provided need to be cited in the text so that the links can be easily accessible, and the readers know where this information is coming from. For clarification, to the end of the last sentence, "failed at responding to the most egregious forms of fraud," I would add the population that was committing this fraud (ex. "failed at responding to the most egregious forms of fraud being committed within non-Black communities", etc.). Overall, the addition of this information will strengthen and improve this article.