User:Littlemissfeminist/War on poverty/ZBron22 Peer Review

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The references you have so far look good and help to provide the evidence to support the article's overall purpose. It is helpful in having an overall understanding of the effects to include the statistics.

Since you include information regarding the aftermath of the war on poverty on Black Americans, it might be helpful to make this its own section so that you can distinctively show that is an area of focus to address within the article. I appreciated this inclusion to your chosen article since history does not often look at the repercussions of the war on poverty on people of color, especially Black men.

Also, I am not sure if there is additional information you can find on the aftermath and its effects on children, but this might also add to the overall article. My article is focused on Child Poverty worldwide but you might be able to find more specific info for it in the US. A short section on children might be good but depends on what research you could find.

If you divided up your work into specific areas of focus or sections, this might help readers understand how the stats piece into the specific "aftermath" section you are including. Overall I think you're doing a great job so far!