User:Litzyg27/User:MisaPerez99/Iván Argote/Litzyg27 Peer Review

The leading paragraph gets straight to the point of who Ivan Argote is, could be a little more detail, but it seems good to me.

The content is good, but it seems to be in present tense, such as like in the first sentence you could try "during a time were politics ruled his household" or "where politics were ruling his household". It all seems up to date just try to make sure its in past tense, since he already lived through it. Also maybe try adding a little more about his artwork.

Tone and balance is very descriptive and it just seems to be telling his life story and accomplishments. Not biased towards anything.

Sources are current and there is a sufficient amount.

Overall a good presentation on Ivan Argote, try adding more to his artwork and just fixing minor errors, overall the article is good and I personally don't think it needs to be longer or shorter, it is a good length.

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