User:Livelygoose/Haft Peykar/Butcherpath Peer Review

General info
Livelygoose
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Livelygoose/Haft Peykar
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Haft Peykar

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD:

No change was made to the lead section.

CONTENT:

It looks like you only added two sentences,.

The content in those sentences are good, though I think you should probably add more.

TONE AND BALANCE:

The tone of what you added is fine. There is no bias that I am aware of.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES:

I think that your references are done incorrectly. When I pressed on the link, it drew me to a different reference section from the one pasted from the article.

Additionally, you have added only 1 additionally reference here, I think you should try to find more.

ORGANIZATION:

I think the placement of your editions is fine.

IMAGES AND MEDIA:

There were no images added. I am not sure the legality of the texts you were commenting upon.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I think the sentences you added were good additions and fit nicely with the current article. But I don't feel like there is really enough content for me have too significant of an impression quite yet.