User:Livg21/Climate change and gender/Etaolive2256 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Livg21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Livg21/Climate_change_and_gender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate change and gender

Evaluate the drafted changes
* For the edit in the section "Gender Differences in Contributions to Climate Change": I think that's a great idea, to add more of how women affect climate change in a positive light. The source you used for this edit is solid, but I think it might be more impactful to do some research on some more in depth sources, such as a research article, for example, that could show what types of knowledge women possess that could help in climate change. Maybe some of the links on the UNFCCC page could lead you to some research on the subject?

* For the edit in the section "Gender-blind adaptation policy": I think this is a really good section, and a good source that you've used as well. It seems like you really covered what the Gender Action Plan is about. I think you're idea for non-binary folk is really good, and maybe you could find one or two more sources on that, it might be good even, if you find there's nothing addressing non-binary people, to say that in the wikipedia article, as that's something important for people to know, that these people are not included in this discussion.

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