User:Livharris04/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Glassblowing

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I think that glassblowing is a very cool form of art. It is a very unique and dangerous way of sculpting, and it should be preserved. I think that it is a very good article. I actually used it a few semesters back to help me with another project, but I have done extensive research on the topic and I know that there are things that can be added.

Evaluate the article
The lead is very good. It gives a brief description of what glassblowing is, and it is not overly detailed at all. The article covers all the major topics, such as history and different techniques, but I wish it had more information on the current information, like what some of the major facilities are. The page is not biased. It presents facts in a neutral tone. The sources that I checked seem to be good and up to date. There are just under 40 citations for the whole article.