User:Livia.nelson/Advocates for Youth/Cabranc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Livia.nelson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Livia.nelson/Advocates for Youth
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Advocates for Youth

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is indeed concise and appropriate. It defines the topics in a manner that is informative, yet brief. The page itself is in its introductory stages concerning structure and content, which offers Livia and Jada ample opportunity to manufacture material that is reflective of the current time, representative of all perspectives (majority and minority), and is balanced and neutral in its subject. This group has included sources relevant to their topic so they are well on that front. One suggestions or thing that I would keep in mind is involving the spectrum of perception or treatment towards sexual education so that they article is comprehensive in its approach. All in all, this quite the start.