User:Livia.nelson/Advocates for Youth/Zatayl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Livia.Nelson, Jsanderson31


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Advocates for Youth - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very well organized and straight to the point. It was very easy to follow and quite intriguing. Additionally, the sources seem current and there are tons of references and they all work. However, the article page itself says it could use more secondary sources so that may be something to add. The article itself is easy to read and it is pretty short so it keeps you engaged. I think it would be beneficial to add whether the policies and programs were effective or not and what determined this.