User:Livingstoneag/Mary Ware Dennet/Nicardooo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Livingstoneag


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Livingstoneag/Mary_Ware_Dennet?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mary Dennett

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have multiple sources backing up the information you want to add which is good, just make sure they are reliable sources. Your content is neutral and not attempting to persuade the reader of anything. What you have is well written, but in terms of the snippet about birth control, I feel there is more information you could include. You could tie it back to gender representation more and relate it to class topics, or just go into further detail about her contributions because there is definitely more that could be said. Overall it looks really good so far and I think the information you want to add is important and relevant to her page.