User:Livvv2024/Brontotheriidae/KenKardashin Peer Review

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Characteristics and evolution

Embolotherium may have used its large nasal cavity to make vocalizations in order to communicate with others of its species. Add intext citation.

'''They are most alike the horns that modern Giraffes possess, since they were likely covered by skin and do not have grooves for nutrient blood vesses. They also tend to have evidence of secondary bone growth, likely due to impact from head clashing.''' Some rewording to make it read easier, you also misspelled "vessel". Maybe like --> Similar to Giraffes, their horns were most likely covered in skin with no signs of grooves for blood vessels. There is some evidence of their horns undergoing secondary grow, likely due to impact from head-clashing.

Discovery

Brontotheres were one of the first (add "fossilized") mammals to be discovered west of the Missisippi. Misspelled Mississippi. Marsh came up with the term "Brontotheridae," identified them as odd-toed ungulates, and identified distinguishing characteristics of the group. Some reword to make it read easier like --> Marsh would later taxonomically classify and name them.

Refrences

Some of your citations have incorrect dates, you can change these manually by clicking on the reference and putting in the correct date, often times it just cites year month which it won't accept for whatever reason.