User:LivyRosa/Carbon farming/ShanPitt Peer Review

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Carbon farming by LivyRosa


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 * Carbon farming


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 * Carbon farming

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I think this is a great article with a lot of detail. It not only looks at the many carbon farming techniques but also the history of carbon farming in Australia and North America. I think one thing that could be added to is the introduction, this could be more in depth and Gove more of an intro to carbon farming. I think the content is well throughout and concise but still in depth and flows well. I do believe that each technique of carbon farming and carbon farming as a whole could include more pro and cons of each. What is good and what can be worked on with each technique. I like the visuals that take place in the arctic as is gives that reader something to relate to about what they are reading. The techniques of carbon farming that could use more explanation are bamboo, silvopasture, organic mulch, cover crops and hybrids as well as the challenges. I think there are little gaps in the article and shows more areas that could be highlighted better but the references are very up to date and reputable. The tone of the article is good because it is unbiased, and the organization is well thought out as the article flows well from one topic to the next. overall impressions are that this article has little to no gaps and is well planned and spoken, although some areas could use a deeper dive into the information I think its a very good start.