User:Liyuabel2003/African Americans in Atlanta/Jkintu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing

Jasmine Kintu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African Americans In Atlanta


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African Americans in Atlanta

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Everything that I have read has been great. Maybe add some photos but other than that I see no flaws regarding for example content or tone. All the information you added made this article more complete. I like how you added the bit about Lil Durk. Adding an example pulls the reader in.