User:LizDharmavat/Childhood trauma/Phdstudent13 Peer Review

Peer Review:
Hi, LizDharmavat!

I noticed that you moved the first paragraph of the original post, "The effects of childhood trauma can be mitigated..." to the new section you created titled, "Introduction to Treatments." That seems like a helpful beginning of the article so that the reader knows the basis for why you are discussing treatment options. The new heading/section was a good idea to make the article clearer, too. I would also move the section on complex PTSD to the beginning, because its location in the middle of the treatment options make it seem like it is also a treatment option.

Since you mention psychopharmacology, I would create a new section for it or a subsection within the CBT section. It is a good idea to discuss, as it gives the reader another option for treatment, but it got lost in that bulky paragraph on CBT. The 2nd paragraph under the DBT section was a little bit confusing to me, so I am wondering if you can either delete it OR break it down to make it more palatable. I think another option is to describe DBT more thoroughly and explain how it works. The Real Life Heroes treatment is not something I am familiar with, and I see that you also noted to check on that. The citation listed seems valid, but you could also note that it is not a treatment option recognized by Division 12 (include link) or a treatment with strong efficacy.

This looks like a complex article to edit, nice work!