User:Lizenacruz/Materialist feminism/Giselle grande Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lizenacruz/Materialist feminism


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lizenacruz/Materialist feminism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Materialist feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

From what I saw there were grammer changed within sections of Wikiapedia article, not sure anything is going to be added to the article

I did not think to look at grammer changes within the wikiapedia article.