User:Lizmtay/Psychology of music preference/Grahamal Peer Review

General info
lizmtay
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
For your article, I think you are making the right changes, like adding information that intends there is a minimal connection to emotional regulation and music training rather than being none at all. It will be important to make sure the research that does support this claim is from literature that is Wikipedia approved (this has been difficult for me but I have tried to stick to articles that are in books since they are likely to be a review of a number of studies). I think you will be able to improve your article by elaborating more into the research the original article provides by stating the limitations and study sizes because it could provide that neutral state.