User:Lizmtay/Psychology of music preference/Lkshephe Peer Review

General info
Lizmtay
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lizmtay/Psychology of music preference
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Psychology of music preference

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to the original article is relevant to the topic of psychology of music. Most of the content added seems to be in the area of adding additional citations to support work. I think this will help to provide to strength the evidence. There has also been changing of wording to provide clarification. Changing "though no connection has been found" to "though minimal connection has been found" helps to clarify and not have black-and-white statements. The source that has been added is a primary source, however it is recommended to use secondary sources. I would recommend finding additional sources (secondary sources) and adding to the underdeveloped portions of the article, such as certain subheadings under the personality traits heading.