User:Lizmtay/Psychology of music preference/Zclayt Peer Review

Firstly, I think that the topic psychology of music preference seems like it might have been a very interesting topic to search and read about. Within your sandbox and your writing, I can tell that you may have really liked and enjoyed the topic as well and I think that is a good way to be. Some changes that I would suggest would be to add an article body to your sandbox if at all possible because I did not notice one included. I really did like the amount of references and lead paragraph that you included within your sandbox though. Nice job on those two. I would have added only a little more information and detail in the lead paragraph.

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