User:Lizsez/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Tutankhamun: Tutankhamun
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate. I chose this article because he is a famous but mysterious figure and new discoveries about ancient Egypt and this person in particular seem to happen every few years.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? It is descriptive but not brief.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is very detailed, perhaps too much.

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content up-to-date? Yes, it was updated very recently
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No.

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Most sources are from the last ten years. A few are more than a decade old.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? easy to read, but a bit long.
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? no
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes
 * Are images well-captioned? Yes
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? I presume
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? Yes

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? Not much.
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? GA (Good Article). No.
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? We did not discuss this topic in class.

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status? Semi-protected due to vandalism
 * What are the article's strengths? The article is thorough.
 * How can the article be improved? The article is also about the tomb, more about the person would be good.
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed? Well developed

Overall evaluation
This is a good article, and quite informative.

Optional activity

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