User:Lizzethmancilla/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Rosca


 * Article Evaluation
 * User:Lizzethmancilla/Evaluate an Article


 * Sources
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_scopus2-s2.0-84927794877
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest852703226
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest196739676
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_gale_ofa350577159

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Concha


 * Article Evaluation
 * I think the lead of the article does a great job at providing an introduction to the type of bread. I think it gives a great overview of origin, its variations, and how its made. It is all written in one section and I think it could benefit from being broken into different sections. It does a great job of remaining neutral and not trying to persuade the reader one way or another. I think some potential topics that could also be covered is the history of it, if it differs in any of the 32 states of Mexico, etc. Everything in the article is relevant, however, I would look more into different sources. The two listed aren't secondary sources and I think it would be interesting to see if there's any articles in our library databases about its origin. Like my first option, it is under the Mexico and Food and drinks WikiProjects. There are no comments in the Talk section.


 * Sources
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_bcrc88726100
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest303435070
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest303565211

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Doom Days


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is for Bastille's (band) album Doom Days which was released in 2019. I think this article provides a great overview to the album. The organization of this page is also extremely helpful as it covers many different topics such as the background, promotion, track-list, and how it performed in music charts. It also provides information on the year, genre, producers, and ratings from different websites. I think the lead does a great job summarizing the album, including its singles, and tour dates. The article doesn't include any pictures besides the album cover, but I don't know what other pictures could be included. Overall the information included in the article is really informative. I learned a lot about the album that I didn't know. All the links to other pages such as to their record label, producers, charts, etc. made it easier to follow along with the article (could click on links if something was confusing). It is under the WikiProjects Album, however, there is no discussion about what to add or changes to make. Overall, I think the article is fairly strong. However, I noticed that the sources are all from websites like Billboard, Forbes, Official Charts Company, etc. I think it would be interesting to see if there are any sources from our library databases.


 * Sources
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest2299063942
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_proquest2305409623
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/lvbsh/TN_gale_ofa589555205

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Avant-garde architecture


 * Article Evaluation
 * As with a lot of articles that I've opened, I think the lead does a great job of providing a concise yet informative introduction to the subject. I also think the content section at the beginning is helpful in letting the reader know what else is going to be covered in the article. In terms of content, I remember learning about Avant-garde architecture in one of my UW classes, so I think there is a lot more I could add to the "Concept" section. However, what is already written is relevant and informative. Most of the sources are outdated (late 1990s to early 2000s), so I think it would be interesting to see what newer publications say. I think most of the content is neutral, but there are some phrases used to describe it such as "innovative and radical" that seem to be leaning towards one perspective. But, I think it does a great job of providing other point of views by including what critics have to say. The article also includes links to "architects" and "schools and movements" avant-garde architecture is associated with which provides a lot of context and is also helpful in providing possible topics to expand on. Since it is about architecture, I think the article could benefit from more pictures, to give visual context to the concepts and ideas associated with it.


 * Sources
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71161686890001451
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71189265990001451
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71101446190001451
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71189265410001451
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71309970110001451
 * https://alliance-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/f/kjtuig/CP71181938410001451

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Sources
 * Sources