User:Ljasoncsusb/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Herb Aach

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The article seemed pseudo complete with enough substance to evaluate. It is relevant to the course and my Major.

Evaluate the article
Overall, the information had relevancy to the Herb Aach. Some provided information such as his receptions were vague and felt off tangent. The reception part also lacked enough sources to make me confident in the portrayal, so that could be improved upon. Structurally I feel as though Career and Achievement could come before his personal life, and would like more information to be added to the Career section. Overall the article was neutral, but more sources could be added to attain a sense of security in the reception section.

Links to some of the references have either ceased to work or do not work. This needs to be addressed.The talk page seems to be an average changelog, with some personal connections to the family members of Herb Aach. Potentially the reason why there is interest in creating a wiki page.