User:Ljc22b/Low culture/Anonymousardvark Peer Review

General info
Ljc22b, Pangalan.ko
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ljc22b/Low culture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Low culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Organization:

Looks like the group has a solid plan for organization of the article as all the headings are in place within the sandbox draft page. In order to decipher what the group I added to the page, I cross-referenced the regular low culture wikipedia page with the sandbox draft. It looks to me that the group is going to re-order a lot of the information within the wikipedia page and make the headings and the information within them more clear.

After reading over the low culture page, this seems like a great idea because a lot of the content it has on the wikipedia page seems to be in the wrong subcategory.

Content/Lead:

It also looks like the group is proposing an alternate lead into the wikipedia page with an alternate or new definition of low culture and hopefully provides some more analysis of that as it related to mass media and society.

There seem to also be a lot of small subheadings with minimal information that could be improved upon by the group. The article could be organized much more clearly to show and represent low cultures effect and presence in mass media, audiences, theories, etc.