User:Ljc22b/Low culture/Tikey105! Peer Review

General info
Ljc22b and Pangalan.ko
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ljc22b/Low culture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Low culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Organization:

I found that the writing was very well done, although I do think that some thoughts could be expressed in simpler terms. If put into simpler terms, I think it would be an easier read. The content is broken up nicely in the layout. I didn't find any grammar errors either.

Content:

I found the content a little difficult to stay engaged with because it seemed a little wordy. I think it could be a little more straight-forward. Otherwise, after check some references and links, all of the information seemed up-to-date and relevant. I think that a topic that they could add more to is stereotypes. It would be a good place for people to see how it might be present in their lives and understand real-life application of Low culture.

Tone and Balance:

The tone and balance flowed with the Wikipedia article that had already been published. The context was very unbiased and only stated facts.