User:Lka002/Hippocampus kuda/Crf009 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lka002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lka002/Hippocampus_kuda?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hippocampus kuda

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft looks very good so far. The draft is well organized and clearly written. This did a good job of adding some new information and also rewriting some of the previous information to make it more clear. This draft is trending towards the improvement of the article which seems to lack a lot of information. Overall, this draft is very good and my only suggestion would be to rewrite the first sentence. This sentence seems like it was cut off and is missing an end.