User:Lkhk32/The Hunger Games: Catching Fire/Ivitello Peer Review

This rough draft is a great start for this assignment. It had interesting insight on the ecological integrity of the film including food and starvation and political ecology. At the bottom there is a heading that says “Environment”, when written I think it would be interesting to write about how realistic it would be to replicate the environments in the games. Each section has a few resources that look reliable, just one mistake that needs to be checked is the fourth link is just of a “gale-product login”. The link just takes you to a login in page, so I am assuming a mistake was made there. One other thing I would consider adding would be more of an explanation in your own words of what political ecology is exactly. Overall, this article is off to a good start.

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