User:Lkshephe/Military psychology/Grahamal Peer Review

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lkshephe
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


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Evaluate the drafted changes
So far I think you have added information that improves the article by elaborating more into the therapy's that military psychologists use. I think real-world examples of how these interventions are carried out could be beneficial as well. For the education section, I like the you provided an outline that helps the reader gain an overview but I think it could benefit by a more detailed explanation of the educational requirements and career paths could provide a guidance. Overall, it looks like you are going in a good direction with your article and improving it!