User:Llada75/Reading comprehension/Camiadmire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Llada75


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 * This user made recent edits directly into the original article.


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 * Reading comprehension: Revision history - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Comments/ suggestions for the article you are improving based off your most recent edits.

My suggestions mainly pertain to organization


 * Move the definition section. Incorporate this section into the very beginning part of the article that is currently unlabeled instead of having it by itself. Its current placement just creates confusion and repetition. Once that's been completed, label the beginning part of the article the definition of reading comprehension. This will assist in making the article clearer.
 * Combine the overview and history section. They appear to share similarly related information. This will assist in reducing confusion because the sections will not be separated. Readers will not have to renavigate the content.
 * Label the vocabulary section differently. Its current title is misleading. It implies it is going to discusses reading comprehension vocabulary not how vocabulary is related to reading comprehension.

Areas of strength


 * Citations. This article contains numerous citations to be able to locate information.
 * Content. This article contains a high volume of information. One can tell the topic was well-researched.
 * Examples. This article provides a wide variety of strategies associated with reading comprehension. Readers can understand how it is implemented.