User:Llgilpin03/John Baldessari/Tul10616 Peer Review

General info
Llgilpin03
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Llgilpin03/John_Baldessari?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):John Baldessari

Evaluate the drafted changes
You've compiled a lot of information on his exhibitions and presented them in a very concise and easy way to read. The list is very digestible and comprehensive with good sources to back them up. The existing article already seems to have a lot of information, however I would go in and fix grammatical errors and the way information about his education is presented. Overall, great work!