User:Lll84/Mass media and American politics/Robinsonmaddux2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lll84


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lll84/Mass_media_and_American_politics?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mass media and American politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been completed in the Sandbox draft, so it should be updated.

The content added is relevant to the topic and seems up to date (citations from 2000s). There is some content missing so the article is a little confusing.

The content added is not neutral, it reads like a persuasive/argumentative paper. There seems to be a point that the writer wants the reader to listen to, but since some information is missing, it is confusing to read.

The sources are properly linked and cited (I can click each of the links and it brings me to the source).

There are no images, that could be helpful when trying to make a point.