User:Llniemeyer/Diospyros nigra/TRoselle0998 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Llnie Meyer)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Diospyros nigra
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Diospyros nigra
 * Diospyros nigra

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this looks like a good draft to add information to the Diospyros Nigra article. I really liked how all your additions were in separate bullets and you had a reference (footnote for everything). You also seem to be using good sources like .edu I also like howe much you found you have a lot of good things that you want to add. I also like how you have everything bullet pointed it makes everything you have really clear and organized

A couple of thing you might improve on: I saw a that there was a few blue lines I just thought maybe you should fix them even though I believe you will. Maybe you'd want to check the sources that you've link like the (footpoint source) and the ( life style and wellness ) because I don't know if Wikipedia will allow it so you might want to double check it