User:Lluviosa/3-Hydroxypropionate bicycle/Katiemeow2 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lluviosa/3-Hydroxypropionate_bicycle/Katiemeow2_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):3-Hydroxypropionate bicycle

Evaluate the drafted changes
It could be helpful to have a separate introduction paragraph about the general idea of this pathway, then have another paragraph explaining the chemistry behind the pathway. This might make the complicated pathway more digestible for the reader.

I would be interested in a section about the benefits of using this pathway for the organisms that utilize it.

All the information posted looks great!