User:Lm1403/Wellness (alternative medicine)/Axolotl61 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lm1403


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Talk:Wellness (alternative medicine)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello!

I want to start off by saying that I think your Talk comment was great, and loved to see your close reading of the original article and your updated list of possible sources. And honestly those sources look interesting-I would love to read the Decolonizing Wellness source! I think you did a good job working with the article you got, and added helpful suggestions to give the article a more in depth, balanced approach. I think my only suggestion would be to consider adding another talk comment about the possibility with consolidating this article with the alternative medicine wikipedia article? It might be worth starting up that discussion on the talk page, and considering ways that wellness could be added to that article. It seems like the alt med article might get more readership, and might be a great place to share some of these ideas in context. But I think that what you have added to the talk page already is great, and feels like a more diverse set of perspectives to inform the article.