User:Lm1403/Wellness (alternative medicine)/Madisonminelli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lm1403


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wellness (alternative medicine)
 * Wellness (alternative medicine)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would like to start off by saying that I had trouble finding the actual changes that were made to the article by your group, but, overall, I think that the article does a really good job in relaying the history associated with the term, but think that there should be less detail with the history and more of a focus on defining the term itself. On the Talk Page for the article, someone else reiterated this by saying the article could benefit from a deeper exploration of what wellness "actually is." On Wikipedia, people just want the "gist" and will often get lost in the "weeds" so to speak if the information is not concise and understandable to the average person. In this sense, tightening up the intricate details and using more everyday language could really help the article.