User:Lm1403/Wellness (alternative medicine)/RFW17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LM1403, NKL18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wellness (alternative medicine)
 * Wellness (alternative medicine)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is good that you guys incorporated new and up to date links in the history section. I think that the article could use some more expansion and talk more about the different interpretations and definitions of wellness and how it has become popularized in all aspects and fields in society. I also think for criticisms you can mention how wellness has been marketed by our capitalist society to force people to best contribute to our economy as functional able-bodied laborers, as highlighted by some of the texts we read in class.