User:Lmellen/Beach cleaning/Anmramir Peer Review

General info
Bbakkal, I Have No Authority, Lmellen

Link to draft you're reviewing: Beach cleaning

Lead
I enjoyed reading this article, as it was interesting and easy to follow. I think all the headings and subheadings included are important ideas to be addressed. One thing after reading your overview, the first thing I asked myself was, "how do people clean beaches, what methods are there?". A structural comment I would make would to possibly put methods before the benefits of beach cleaning.

Content
I would say content is good, put could definitely be expanded if you're looking to add more. Expanding the effects of ecology, public health, and sustainability could be incorporated. Including statistics and quantifiable data would be very effective to demonstrate how big of a problem and how important beach cleaning is. Also, highlighting beaches or coasts that need the most cleaning, or areas that have been sufficiently cleaned in the past/currently could be a way to expand the article.

Tone and Balance
I think the tone and balance of the article was fairly neutral.


 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References
This article has many sources and references that seem to be reliable. All seem to be credible academic and governmental articles with some backed up case studies.

Organization
The article was organized well, all the headers and sub-headers were relevant and provided important information.

Images and Media
The article seems to have many, well-captioned pictures. This is important to an article and this group did a good job with relevant, appropraite media.

Overall impressions
The article seems articulated well, and improvements seem to have been made. The articles strengths are relevant content, good tone and balance, and media. However, the article can be added to, to expand the article and include more information.