User:Lmfscots/Sexual repression/Abbyeveridge Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username): Lmfscots
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Lmfscots/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?: yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?: yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?: yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?: yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?: a little overly detailed but not to a fault

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?: yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?: yes but could add more recent info
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?: no
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?: yes

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?: yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?: no
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?: no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?: no

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?: not all
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?: yes but could add more
 * Are the sources current?: some
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?: not particularly
 * Check a few links. Do they work?: yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?: yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?: none that I noticed
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?: yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?: yes
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?: pretty good but more should be added
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?: yes
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?: yes

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?: yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added?: I like how they added specific studies and also specific American issues of sexual repression.
 * How can the content added be improved?: add more recent research