User:Lmnocarp/Lago Grande de Curuaí/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Hana,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 564 and you have 8 refs (all scientific articles).

So far this is a well informed intro for your lake/flood-plane. I would make sure to link some of the more non-common words with other wiki pages. This allows the reader to learn definitions of words they may not know and better understand your article. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but a few read overs should fix that. Make sure you write at least 4 paragraphs on current research on the flood-plane. All you have written so far is an intro and general knowledge of the lake. Great start though!

-Katie

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