User:Lmnocarp/Lago Grande de Curuaí/Maxss20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lmnocarp


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lmnocarp/Lago_Grande_de_Curua%C3%AD?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have a lot of good information about the characteristics of the lake. However, I would recommend adding a lead section to provide just the most basic information about the lake to introduce your article. This is related to my main suggestion which would be to break up the information into separate sections to make the article more organized and the information more accessible. All the grammar is good, and the tone is always neutral. For the final draft adding an image would be nice touch. The description of the lake's characteristics is great so my only suggestion regarding content would be to add a section discussing any studies or experiments done on the lake if there are any. It looks like you found a lot of good sources already, and your article is very informative.