User:Lng012/Epigenesis (biology)/Devynbrandt Peer Review

General info
Lng012
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lng012/Epigenesis_%28biology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Epigenesis (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There have been no major or minor edits to this article. Pictures and more information would be great additions to this article, as well as more information regarding the topic. After reading the article the general audience would still be confused on what epigenesis is, a good wiki article should address this as the audience is general so most people wouldn't know Bio-specific terms. Finding ways to explain epigenesis to a general audience, like a high schooler or your parents, would be really beneficial to this article. Pictures that are labeled would also be super helpful, and in our exercises section there is a tutorial that tells you how to add Wikipedia-safe pictures. There weren't any added references that I saw. The first two articles are in French so adding two new articles to supplement these for people who don't speak French would be good, not saying that those should be removed though as they provide information to those who can read French.