User:Lntran0607/Video games in the United States/Ariamaji Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lntran0607


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lntran0607/Video_games_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Video games in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I understand that you are just beginning your edits. I see the same problems that my article has. Mostly the information is out of date so a good update on the statistics and removing old links that do not work. Also if you can determine and remove the "Some" as the note behind it says.

Also for your sources that statistics are being pulled from, maybe try and find an average from several sources or just find another source that agrees with the current data.