User:Loganhardin/Leptospira interrogans/Nikith Naini Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Loganhardin)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Loganhardin/Leptospira_interrogans?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leptospira interrogans

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead in the original article is short and to the point, however I think there could be a little more information added. This was identified and talked about in the sandbox draft, so I think this will be handled well when it is all said and done.

All information in the sandbox comes from recent references that are reliable, I am sure the group will come up with exactly they want to add. There are a lot of things listed so the content will likely be packed full and properly, all that's needed is to present it in the format of the article.

The content is neutral.

All sources are recent and come from reliable sources. The links are working properly as well. The references provided were very well put together and will give the group a lot to work with!

In the sandbox the information is jumbled, but on the real thing it appears fine. The article is very short and could use a lot of extra information, but this is not something bad because a lot of information is in the sandbox and being prepared to be put into the real deal.

There could be more images added to the article. There aren't enough of these to really judge how the article itself looks.

Overall the work has a lot of information that could be added, but the good news is that this information is already found and ready to be put in. There could be more images that would make the article more interesting to look at. The length of the article is also very short, but as I have said multiple times there is a lot you guys have ready to add!