User:Loganhardin/Leptospira interrogans/Raf19275 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

loganhardin, microbio15, young416, dmancao7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Loganhardin/Leptospira_interrogans?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leptospira interrogans

Evaluate the drafted changes
This seems like a great start. I can see that you are compiling reliable sources, many of which are very recent. I noticed that some more metabolism info would likely be added, which is great, as this section could benefit from expansion. I would like to see more description about the glucose sodium symporter or a link to another wiki page that explains this more in depth. I also suggest adding a vaccine section or a section regarding the disease in domestic dogs, as there is a vaccine for dogs that is not mentioned at all within the article. Especially since dogs are brought up in the lead section, the article could benefit from more information about it. It is also likely that there are many reliable veterinary studies about the vaccine and the bacteria in domesticated animals.