User:Loisgriffinxcx/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Disability and women's health - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because it's related to DEI topic of disability, and our group initially chose an article about assistive technology for deaf and hard of hearing. My first impression of the article was that it looked like it had enough information to be able to assess and evaluate it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * the article talks extensively about disabled women in general, but doesn't go into depth about how specific disabilities affect women.
 * inconsistent grammar usage (ex. women with a disability, women with disability)
 * this article provided awareness to the fact that women with disabilities are discriminated against when seeking different types of healthcare and the ways that healthcare can be inaccessible towards them
 * did a good job of explaining how different disabilities affect women
 * the article can be improved by showing the different disabilities that specifically affect women
 * fairly developed, but could use more developing and provide general information