User:Loki96/Calypso (mythology)/Aidenlastname Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Loki96


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Loki96/Calypso_(mythology)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Calypso (mythology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
So, I think it should be apparent that there is not much to this draft. It would be hypocritical to dwell on that, so I'll skip to what should be added. I do not think you need to change the introduction of Calypso, what is there already is fine, it just needs to be built upon. The article, as it is currently, is a fine summary that is lacking in any sort of depth. You just need to polish it up, add the depth that it is sorely lacking.