User:Lolzish/Revenge/Adler512 Peer Review

General info
Lolzish
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Revenge&diff=prev&oldid=1220777434

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made to the article "Revenge" are pertinent and relevant to the topic. The clarity/small grammatical changes are much appreciated, and they elaborate on important points in the article that were not as clear before. If possible, I would search for more of these instances and correct them. The section added to the section on animals and revenge is substantial and especially helps to demonstrate that revenge is common among animals other than more advanced primates. The content is from a neutral point of view, as it clearly describes a peer-reviewed study done on crows. Adding onto this, the study itself is reliable and verifiable, as it comes from a neutral source clearly detailing its findings. There are a variety of sources backing up the claim that crows seek revenge, all of which are independent and verifiable. The information from these sources are presented in a stepwise fashion, linking one point to the next in an easy-to-follow manner. This makes for an enjoyable, clearly understandable read. All the links to the sources work, and the new information provided substantially improves the article by elaborating on a previous point. If anything, I would suggest finding a few more sources on crow behavior and revenge, which could help to flesh out your point even more. Overall though, excellent work.