User:Longmv/Lasmigona/Caleedenman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Longmv


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Longmv/Lasmigona


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lasmigona

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * add brief list of the sections mentioned in the paper, but they are set up nicely!

Content


 * the sections seem to cover a broad array of information and I think it will be good once the information is added in

Tone and Balance


 * not really an article that could be biased so it is good!

Sources and References


 * It would be good to add a few sources. The mollusk website seems informative but not the best source so I would try to find multiple to supplement it!

Organization:


 * The sections seem like they will work well when more information is added

Overall Impression:


 * Sections have been added but not filled in so I can review this again once more is added!