User:Loni &nr/sandbox

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Plans for the Twinster article edit

 * I would like to edit some of the minor grammatical/syntax mistakes within the article itself
 * I plan to add some more details on what the twins educational backgrounds were and/or what the twins have been up to post-production of the film

Draft of article edit
For overall intro information blurb (at the top) will add: The film was released as a biography genre documentary originally on March 15, 2015 at South by Southwest. As of April 2016, the film is available through various streaming platforms such as Netflix and the Apple store. On May 7th, 2018 the documentary made its television debut on Freeform. The network ABC bought a comedy based on the Twinsters documentary as of September 2016 from the creators responsible for Funny or Die. For more addition to the plot portion: After the two women experience their first video call, they can confirm that they do in fact bare a striking resemblance to each other, and from that point set out to prove whether they are sisters, and furthermore if they are in fact twins.

Also added in the actual conference name that the twins attended in the film: International Korean Adoptee Associations Conference

Added a section on the Impact of the Film:

The movie first premiered on March 15, 2015 at the South by Southwest Film Festival. The film was met with great response and at the festival was recognized for its editing, receiving special jury recognition. The film was also met with praise at the Los Angeles Asian Pacific Film Festival in which the film then later received the recognition as the best documentary through the grand jury prize.

Following the success of the movie, the twins, Futerman and Bordier were able to publish a book, Separated @ Birth: A True Love Story of Twin Sisters Reunited, recounting their story and process of adapting to life with the knowledge of each other, as well as their experiences adjusting back to normal life after they parted ways. The book served to give some more minuscule details of the twins' conversations and life after meeting each other, and gave more context on their situation from the perspectives of each woman.

In the following years after the premiere of the movie, Futerman has served as an adoption advocate with Jenna Ushkowitz, a fellow actress known in the public to be a Korean adoptee and star of Glee. The two worked together to cofound a company dedicated to providing a resource online for adoptees to learn about options for travel, support, and translation, if they should choose to attempt to reunite with their birth families. The organization, Kindred: The Foundation for Adoption, aims to help adoptees with varying needs and issues, as well as their families, in trying to reconnect and reestablish their lives together.

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