User:Looganealabbas/Punu people /Johns9ea Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Looganealabbas
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Looganealabbas/newsandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * There is no lead for the article.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes. The content is from 2008.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * I'm assuming it is. I do not have access to the book used.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * I found a few articles that had more information regarding Punu art, but the information added is useful.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes. They are from 2008.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * It is written in a way that makes sense.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * There are a few sentences that could be split up into two. For example, I would write: "The masks are life size, they can cover a persons face, they are worn by the dancers in south Gabon." as "The masks are life sized, meaning that they cover a person's entire face. They are worn by dancers in South Gabon."
 * I see no spelling errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes. My only suggestion is to have the heading say "Art" rather than "Punu Art" since it is already an article about the Punu.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Yes.
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * The caption could include the type of mask it is.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * I believe so.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * To enhance the appeal of the image, I would place it to the right of the information rather than at the bottom.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes. Adding this section helps the future reader understand more about Punu culture.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The information is clear and helpful. It is cited correctly.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * There are a few grammar mistakes as well as sentences that could be cleaned up a little bit. I would add more information about the masks and maybe even another section about a different kind of Punu art.