User:Loon-erMoth/Brownfield regulation and development/Trey.Timban Peer Review

General info
Loon-erMoth, Thistlehatch
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Loon-erMoth/Brownfield regulation and development
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brownfield regulation and development

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes are more so straight additions of new sections to the existing article rather than edits which is still good! The Lead introductory section is a good overview of what brownfields are, but I might include a little more background info on examples of brownfields and their redevelopment processes. The background section information provides a lot of good relevant information on the harms of brownfields, pros of remediation and real-life examples, however I feel like the section should have some citations for some of the info stated. In regards to the other sections added, I felt that they were relevant and added a nice aspect of looking into foreign relations and how other countries handle brownfield sites in comparison with the US/EPA. I like how the structure of the international policy sections is organized by country/region. I also thought the inclusion of specific data provided on the EU and China was very thorough and showed valuable insight into for the subtopics. However, a lot of the specific data references and statisitcal figures are uncited, so I would just make sure you go back and add citations for those. Other than the addition of citations, the only other change I would suggest would be to break up/shorten some of the longer paragraphs (such as the one that starts with "The National Development and Reform commission...."), as I feel it would flow better as 2-3 paragraphs instead. Also, it seems like the references that were added for the China policy and remediation section weren't added to the Wiki citation list and don't match up to the numbers listed so just be careful with the citations. Otherwise it looks good so far!