User:Lopezj17/Brain and Writing/Zapytowskil1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lopezj17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lopezj17/Brain_and_Writing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to this article seems to be updated but it is only two sentences long. The intro sentence needs to be improved by giving a background on the information you are writing about. The lead does not include any brief explanations of the articles main points. The intro and lead need to be longer and have more detail. It is difficult to see if the content is up to date because there isn't much content in the article. There definitely is missing content and more needs to be added. The content seems to be neutral not taking any particular sides to begin with. The author has a good set of sources to pull from and they are up to date. The links do work and they it seems there is a lot more information you can pull from those links. The author has not added an image yet so adding images is definitely something to think about. The article meets Wikipedia's Notability requirements because there is sufficient sources. Overall, there needs to be more work and detail done to make this a complete Wiki page.